After showing the 'opening' to our media class we have come across many problems that we did not pick up on. The first being the whole film seemed too much like a music video instead of a movie opening. This is due to some over extended shots and no change in music and storyline.
If we get another 3 days free from the company, we will shoot another shot that we initially had in our planning but due to the cameras failure we could not complete. This shot is of the 'Missing' girl rocking back and forth in a darkened corner while a man steps across the camera with a wrench in his hand. By adding this shot it will give our opening a whole new layer and show that the story actually has a plot.
We also have been advised to add in an extreme close up of the alcoholic bottle smashing on the floor to add a new dimension into our production but due to a strong opinionated team member disagreeing with this idea due to it being 'cheesy' we have scrapped this thought.
After taking every bit of constructive criticism on board, we went away enlightened and ready to improve our frist draft.
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